To ensure that my initial ideas where going in the right direction
I gave my peers the first draft shooting script, so I could get some feedback
and develop my ideas further. The majority of the feedback was very positive and
indicated to me that my level of detail was high and my chosen shots were appropriate
for creating the intended meaning and action.
A suggestion give to me was that I should change some of the
shots and break up the repetition, however repetition is a key part of my
narrative and I feel that the shots that I use add emphasis to this and make it
clear.
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